Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Ha! Ha! it sounds like the sailor had his dream tattooed, I have not got any tattoos or piercings, though piercings may not be permanent, I just never found a reason, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I have often wondered about tattoos and how aging affects them. I know how it's effected my body. This is a fun poem to read, and I smiled. Thank you for sharing this presentation with us.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

I have a blue rose tattoo and a full moon on my back so I don't know what they look like now... lol

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i have 2 small tattoos on the inside of my arm close to my wrist... semicolon and half a heart (so it looks like a whole heart)
my daughter has her dad's signature and birth & death dates on her upper left arm and my signature and birthdate on her upper right arm (she wanted her arms to match lol)

we're saving up for a mother/daughter tattoo...

anyway, this was a great little popeye haiku!
nice visual of the hawaiian girl

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

I have a blue rose tattoo and a full moon on my back so I don't know what they look like now... lol

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I'm guessing she was wearing her bikini bottoms, right? That's what I would imagine! Lol. Thanks for sharing. I would think the grass skirt or the ti-leaf skirts were all very uncomfortable!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

The bad thing about tattoos are permanent and some of them change in old people's saggy skin.


Thank you for reading my silly poem.

Love

Marival

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Aha, hey, one should be aware that when the navy is in, then fathers should really lock their daughters in so that grass skirts and panty hose can be retained in their right place, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy

reply by royowen on 03-Feb-2024

Most welcome

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, your poem has good humor. There was a time that Only sailors had tattoos, but in current times, everyone has tattoos, and lots of them.

Of note:
Hawaiian girl's grass skirt

(good alliteration and imagery)

Great photo. Well done. This poem made me laugh. Xo. M

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy