Comment from Jeano

Excellent

You could have been talking about me. I have my first cup around 5:00, and it really is a kick start. You certainly will be in the running for a prize with this one. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

I lot the sharp edges of all the words here. Each one feels a little like a kick, which is a perfect complement to the point of your words! Now THAT's clever writing! I hope you do well at the polls with this gem! xo

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024

thanks a lot

reply by Rachelle Allen on 04-Feb-2024

You're welcome!

Comment from Julie Helms

Excellent

I know this sentiment will be very popular. I am not a coffee drinker but everybody in my universe is ha ha! I tried counting about three times and I keep coming up with 13 syllables in that last line. Maybe double-check that.
Thanks for sharing! Julie

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

thanks will check last sylabble

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is how some people start their day with a shot of black coffee to wake them up, many with identify with your words here, but for me I prepare something more gentle in the morning, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024

thanks