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my goddesses of sunshine

I wrote this for my first girlfriend

2 total reviews 
Comment from Julie Helms
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This is a very passionately stated poem. A love deeper than can be understood.
I wasn't sure, but in your first line you have the plural goddesses. Just wanted to make sure that's what you intended. Thanks for sharing! Julie

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024

Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Excellent poem full of good sensory words and vibrant imagery. Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reviewing this. The repetition was effective.Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2024