A cupid 's love
What would you give up for love?3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading, but if I'm not mistaken this contest requires 2000 words. I could be wrong. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading, but if I'm not mistaken this contest requires 2000 words. I could be wrong. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I was intrigued by this story and your prose style, which has a particular character about it which I enjoyed. So this is a cast out Cupid who gives up his immortality for his amour sacrificial? It's very original, at times the plot becomes a little obscured and there are some edits (e.g. Cupids without an apostrophe) and surrounded by my loved one(s)) and could do with a proof-read. But I'm enchanted by the story and conclusion. This has an interesting, French philosophical element to it and I can tell that you've invested a great deal of time and thought into your post. You enjoy words and master them well. Ideally, it would have read better in larger font and smaller paragraphs to give your words (and the reader:)) more room to breathe. But well done, M Createur! I wish you luck in the contest, Debbie
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I was intrigued by this story and your prose style, which has a particular character about it which I enjoyed. So this is a cast out Cupid who gives up his immortality for his amour sacrificial? It's very original, at times the plot becomes a little obscured and there are some edits (e.g. Cupids without an apostrophe) and surrounded by my loved one(s)) and could do with a proof-read. But I'm enchanted by the story and conclusion. This has an interesting, French philosophical element to it and I can tell that you've invested a great deal of time and thought into your post. You enjoy words and master them well. Ideally, it would have read better in larger font and smaller paragraphs to give your words (and the reader:)) more room to breathe. But well done, M Createur! I wish you luck in the contest, Debbie
Comment Written 06-Feb-2024
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This poem is interesting. So the beginning started out negative but then it ended better. This was very creative. Very well written. Great job I thought it was original.
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This poem is interesting. So the beginning started out negative but then it ended better. This was very creative. Very well written. Great job I thought it was original.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024