The Vector Men
This poetic story is a tribute to Civil War heroes2 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats on your first milestone, Ronny! This is a very original and imaginative verse in this war themed video game eradicating slavery. It's full of action which you cleverly capture and a message that those who fought against slavery are embraced in heaven while the other bosses are defeated. Small edit with burd(e)n. But all well done! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Congrats on your first milestone, Ronny! This is a very original and imaginative verse in this war themed video game eradicating slavery. It's full of action which you cleverly capture and a message that those who fought against slavery are embraced in heaven while the other bosses are defeated. Small edit with burd(e)n. But all well done! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thanks for taking the time to read my poem. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an inventive story and I enjoyed the outcome as the success in banning slavery and giving all human beings equal rights is a battle worth fighting for, a fun post, and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This is an inventive story and I enjoyed the outcome as the success in banning slavery and giving all human beings equal rights is a battle worth fighting for, a fun post, and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you a lot. Glad you enjoyed.