Winter Grasp
The sun shall return.2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The grip of winter has darkened your world here and I enjoyed your inventive post to remind us to be hopeful for Spring. You have a spelling error on line 3 (hearkin). Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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The grip of winter has darkened your world here and I enjoyed your inventive post to remind us to be hopeful for Spring. You have a spelling error on line 3 (hearkin). Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Dolly! Great catch.
Comment from Glenda Collins
I really like this. Eloquent use and choice of words. The pictue you chose as well as the imagery your words created were spot on. I so relate to this poem, as I do not enjoy winter but adore spring, and am counting down the days. Thank you for sharing a lovely piece of writing.
Glenda
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I really like this. Eloquent use and choice of words. The pictue you chose as well as the imagery your words created were spot on. I so relate to this poem, as I do not enjoy winter but adore spring, and am counting down the days. Thank you for sharing a lovely piece of writing.
Glenda
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Ha! Winter sucks! Thanks for reviewing my poem. I'm new at poetry but having fun!
