Stay
Darkness poem, free form3 total reviews
Comment from Gunner Lil
A fine written poem. An easy read that has a great pace and flow. Brings back thoughts of hold my girlfriend (now wife) asking her to stay. She did.
Thank you and good luck.
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A fine written poem. An easy read that has a great pace and flow. Brings back thoughts of hold my girlfriend (now wife) asking her to stay. She did.
Thank you and good luck.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The fear of someone leaving is evident in this post and I remember a recent relationship where my pleading had no results and leaving was something that this person did often. A poignant write, love Dolly x x x
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The fear of someone leaving is evident in this post and I remember a recent relationship where my pleading had no results and leaving was something that this person did often. A poignant write, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Good writing and presentation. I wonder if the author wants a person to stay or the darkness. Sometime people need time alone. I think the repetition is effective here. Thiis is also thought provoking.
Best wishes,
Alex
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Good writing and presentation. I wonder if the author wants a person to stay or the darkness. Sometime people need time alone. I think the repetition is effective here. Thiis is also thought provoking.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
