2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I want my bed covered with Stardust. I know it can happen in my imagination. I think I'll work on that. The cobalt sky is very descriptive. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us. I was blessed.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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I want my bed covered with Stardust. I know it can happen in my imagination. I think I'll work on that. The cobalt sky is very descriptive. Thank you for sharing this entire presentation with us. I was blessed.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
cool stardust haiku
very calming and imagistic word choices
and a smooth flowing connection of the lines
really nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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cool stardust haiku
very calming and imagistic word choices
and a smooth flowing connection of the lines
really nice!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
The fantastic imagery that you've created here is top notch. I love the cozy dark of the night, interrupted but the tiny lights of the stardust. Gives such a warm and intimate feel. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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The fantastic imagery that you've created here is top notch. I love the cozy dark of the night, interrupted but the tiny lights of the stardust. Gives such a warm and intimate feel. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Since we are all made up of similar particles like stardust, I'm sure we can find it everywhere. I liked how you connect the sky and bed.
Praying that your dental work goes well today ð???ð???
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Since we are all made up of similar particles like stardust, I'm sure we can find it everywhere. I liked how you connect the sky and bed.
Praying that your dental work goes well today ð???ð???
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, it should go well and it's not surgery, it's two bridges. But I'm still nervous 😟
Thank you very much. Big
Sister. I hope you have a fan and peaceful weekend. Any grandchildren visiting?
Love,
Gypsy
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Ah those bridges are hard to maintain. How do you feel today? The appointment was today, wasn't it? 💖
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written haiku you have penned about the cobalt sky. You used great descriptive words and very amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing my friend. love and blessings, Teri.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Gypsy, this is a very beautiful and very well written haiku you have penned about the cobalt sky. You used great descriptive words and very amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. Thank you for sharing my friend. love and blessings, Teri.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review, Teri. I hope you're well.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written, and I enjoyed it very much because of your color combination. I had a very hard time reading it but by using the reader that I have on my iPad, I was able to have it read to me and it's beautiful. May you have a blessed night. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This is very well written, and I enjoyed it very much because of your color combination. I had a very hard time reading it but by using the reader that I have on my iPad, I was able to have it read to me and it's beautiful. May you have a blessed night. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a lovely day.
Gypsy hugs
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Comment from Douglas Goff
The font color was a little harder to read on this one. Wondering if you shouldn't match that lightest blue in the sky.
Regardless, your words are beautiful and carry a lot of impact. You must be the Haiku Master.
Douglas
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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The font color was a little harder to read on this one. Wondering if you shouldn't match that lightest blue in the sky.
Regardless, your words are beautiful and carry a lot of impact. You must be the Haiku Master.
Douglas
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
Thank you very much for the suggestion, I changed the font color. I hope it's easier to read.
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a lovely day.
Gypsy hugs
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Perfect my talented friend!
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Thank you 😊