Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three excellent rhymes and nice them of calmness
in this world of turmoil.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

So appreciated.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-You do a good job showing how
the seal calms you.
-Good use of the double meaning of 'waves.'
-A good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024

Thank you for getting my double meaning, and a lovely review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Jan-2024

You are very welcome. I appreciate your reply.