The Outbreak
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "The Breaking Point"A deadly outbreak destroys society as we know it
3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
First of all thank you for your service. It's kind of spooky how realistic this particular line is: ""That's just so's they can keep 'em to themselfs! Weren't no problems yesterday!" another man yelled." this is excellent. It's great to have us looking at everything almost as through a camera through rivers eyes. Boy you have captured all of the hysteria that could be occurring. Good job.
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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First of all thank you for your service. It's kind of spooky how realistic this particular line is: ""That's just so's they can keep 'em to themselfs! Weren't no problems yesterday!" another man yelled." this is excellent. It's great to have us looking at everything almost as through a camera through rivers eyes. Boy you have captured all of the hysteria that could be occurring. Good job.
Comment Written 13-May-2024
reply by the author on 13-May-2024
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Thank you!! I appreciate you.
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Great work
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, this is a vivid scene full of exciting action and described so well, a skilful post and I felt I was there in line with those zombies at the pharmacy waiting for the cure to be handed out. Then the announcement caused panic and people were shot by the security guard, what mayhem. I am glad River was able to escape and get home. This sounds like a mad scene during the Covid epidemic. I remember queuing at the Supermarket and there were arguments over who was first in the queue. A talented post Thomas, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Oh my goodness, this is a vivid scene full of exciting action and described so well, a skilful post and I felt I was there in line with those zombies at the pharmacy waiting for the cure to be handed out. Then the announcement caused panic and people were shot by the security guard, what mayhem. I am glad River was able to escape and get home. This sounds like a mad scene during the Covid epidemic. I remember queuing at the Supermarket and there were arguments over who was first in the queue. A talented post Thomas, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This pandemic changed things in ways we have yet to realize in our world.
Thank you for your kind review!!
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Very true x x x
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written chapter for your book, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a good day and may God bless you as you serve him. Patricia.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This is a beautifully written chapter for your book, and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May you have a good day and may God bless you as you serve him. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thanks
