Another Day
A Yamato Uta poem for the Japanese Club7 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
I find free verse a hard form to write, I have read many, but none have turned my emotions like these words, I went from sorrow to hope in this poem, I cannot help with the form, but your words are pure inspiration, and belief, so very well written****kahpot
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I find free verse a hard form to write, I have read many, but none have turned my emotions like these words, I went from sorrow to hope in this poem, I cannot help with the form, but your words are pure inspiration, and belief, so very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a very poignant free verse poem, June about the sigh at the end of another day without a loved one. A lovely presentation for post number 2000. Well done,
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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This is a very poignant free verse poem, June about the sigh at the end of another day without a loved one. A lovely presentation for post number 2000. Well done,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you! I don't often write free verse. I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Glenda Collins
I love this. A beautiful poem. The last stanza and line were a perfect summation. Beautiful picture too. I enoyed reading this, thank you for sharing.
Blessings.
Glenda
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I love this. A beautiful poem. The last stanza and line were a perfect summation. Beautiful picture too. I enoyed reading this, thank you for sharing.
Blessings.
Glenda
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this poem of love and loss. I don?t usually write free verse and am glad you enjoyed the read. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
I can remember when I was held captive by the passions that encircle the heart, and bind up its prisoner in the coils of emotion, this is on of those amazing poems of passion, well done June, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I can remember when I was held captive by the passions that encircle the heart, and bind up its prisoner in the coils of emotion, this is on of those amazing poems of passion, well done June, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this poem of love and loss. I don?t usually write free verse and am glad you enjoyed the read. Your feedback is much appreciated.
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well done for the club event, and I wish you the very best of the event. I hope that you have a wonderful day and week.God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This is very well done for the club event, and I wish you the very best of the event. I hope that you have a wonderful day and week.God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this poem of love and loss. I don?t usually write free verse and am glad you enjoyed the read. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Firstly, congratulations on your 2000th post June, that is quite an achievement. There is a little sadness in this write, but I also felt a sense of calm and acceptance as we come to terms with loss and still see the beauty in life, a fine poem and I wish I had a six for you, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Firstly, congratulations on your 2000th post June, that is quite an achievement. There is a little sadness in this write, but I also felt a sense of calm and acceptance as we come to terms with loss and still see the beauty in life, a fine poem and I wish I had a six for you, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this poem of love and loss. I don?t usually write free verse and am glad you enjoyed the read. Your feedback is much appreciated.
Comment from Sally Law
Wow, congratulations on your 2000th post, June! Thi is a beautiful poem to celebrate your achievement and so well written and illustrated, and filled with love and hopeful dreams. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Wow, congratulations on your 2000th post, June! Thi is a beautiful poem to celebrate your achievement and so well written and illustrated, and filled with love and hopeful dreams. Sending you my best today as always.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this poem of love and loss. I don?t usually write free verse and am glad you enjoyed the read. Your feedback is much appreciated.