Sadness-Go-Round
Karma will get you5 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This sounds like an open wound festering while you rant on and on knowing that Karma will get the person for whom you vent about and to. Let it all out, my friend! You will feel better and the grief you feel will dissipate and once again the open wound will close and you will feel happiness again.
Jesse
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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This sounds like an open wound festering while you rant on and on knowing that Karma will get the person for whom you vent about and to. Let it all out, my friend! You will feel better and the grief you feel will dissipate and once again the open wound will close and you will feel happiness again.
Jesse
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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I am just waiting for the wound to heal. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This poem is both sad and angry. I would call it righteous anger. He was hurt by a woman. It seemed she was not what he thought she was. It seems he has hope for the future for himself. But not for her.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and rest of the week;
Joan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Hi
This poem is both sad and angry. I would call it righteous anger. He was hurt by a woman. It seemed she was not what he thought she was. It seems he has hope for the future for himself. But not for her.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great day and rest of the week;
Joan
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review. Pain is a process.
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You're welcome, Mia. It surely is.
Joan
Comment from Sally Law
Great poem on sadness. Your structure and presentation are wonderful. I enjoyed it all and the natural flow of thought. Sometimes {{poetry}} can get in the way, if you know what I mean. I see a winner here.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best in the voting booth.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Great poem on sadness. Your structure and presentation are wonderful. I enjoyed it all and the natural flow of thought. Sometimes {{poetry}} can get in the way, if you know what I mean. I see a winner here.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best in the voting booth.
Sally :))
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much. I hope it is a winner as well.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You know what I think, it is a drama-filled poem that has bitterness, not sadness involved. Wow, are you speaking about yourself or someone you know? I'm sorry you have this kind of attitude toward someone you know, how about being a little sad instead of feeling hate?
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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You know what I think, it is a drama-filled poem that has bitterness, not sadness involved. Wow, are you speaking about yourself or someone you know? I'm sorry you have this kind of attitude toward someone you know, how about being a little sad instead of feeling hate?
Comment Written 30-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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There is a string of hate in this piece. It is surrounded by sadness and regret. One day it will be just something that was felt and moved on from.
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Did I get the wrong idea about your poem?
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You take from it what comes to you. I love that others see more in my pieces. Sometimes you all see things I didn't. Seeing your work through another's eyes is wonderful.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This poem is so profound. I can feel the pain in your words. The picture is wow. I don't know what to say. It is intense. Well written. Great Jon
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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This poem is so profound. I can feel the pain in your words. The picture is wow. I don't know what to say. It is intense. Well written. Great Jon
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much.
