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Sheer Delight

A nocturna poem for the Potlatch Club

5 total reviews 
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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They really can be an intricately beautiful thing the dewdrop kissed spider webs, pity about the spiders though. A lovely nocturna poem June, very nicely written.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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You picked the perfect picture for this nocturna poem about the beauty that can be seen even in a spider's web glistening with dewdrops. Thanks for showing me how to do this form!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

Comment from Yusita
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I love how you took something so mundane and ordinary and spoke of it with such beauty and grace. I enjoyed the lovely and evocative imagery. The last three lines were my favorite. This was a delight to read!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024

Comment from Mrs. KT
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Exquisite, June!
And so very perceptive.
I so love to examine and admire spider webs in my gardens.
I often find them between hydrangea branches = simply stunning.

Well-executed!
Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
    I?m
    Glad this one on a spider?s web resonated with you. They are little masterpieces. And the spiders works so hard weaving them. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.
Comment from patcelaw
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I enjoyed your poem very much for the club event, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Your presentation is beautiful and I wish you a very very good week. Patricia.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2024