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Feelings of melancholy and nostalgia in early adulthood
2 total reviews
Comment from
Allieas
You packed a powerful message into so few words. Your poem/story reminds me of a musical I saw years ago, called If/Then, that explores how a woman's life goes when she prioritizes love and then when she prioritizes career. That story always stuck with me
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
Thank you for your feedback!
Comment from
Janet Foor
A thought-provoking piece Colleen. One can see the conundrum she faces. Would she have been happier with another choice. The reader can feel the melancholy and nostalgia in each line.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
Thank you so much, Janet!
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