2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Unconditionally".
10 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
That's right! It's all related! I completely understand your beautiful poem. The repetition makes it even stronger, and the words seem to be coming from your soul to your fingertips to type. Extraordinary work!
Great images too,
Alexan
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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That's right! It's all related! I completely understand your beautiful poem. The repetition makes it even stronger, and the words seem to be coming from your soul to your fingertips to type. Extraordinary work!
Great images too,
Alexan
Comment Written 02-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from jim vecchio
Gypsy, I love you and your words unconditionally. You always present the finest works all dressed up in their finest attire! it's hard for my mind to grasp, but I have FAITH your next work will even top this one!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Gypsy, I love you and your words unconditionally. You always present the finest works all dressed up in their finest attire! it's hard for my mind to grasp, but I have FAITH your next work will even top this one!
Comment Written 01-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Jim. I always appreciate your kind words. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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I always appreciate your words and hugs!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Unconditional love is a rare thing and your faithful post is a fine entry for the contest and I wish you luck, a fine presentation, love Dolly x x x x x
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Unconditional love is a rare thing and your faithful post is a fine entry for the contest and I wish you luck, a fine presentation, love Dolly x x x x x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
I loved this statement of faith because it is pure and sincere and not forced by ritual or outside conventions. My favorite parts are: "scarcity does not define me" and "not a single act of love is squandered."
Yes! Because of His lavish love for us, we can give love lavishly, too!
Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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I loved this statement of faith because it is pure and sincere and not forced by ritual or outside conventions. My favorite parts are: "scarcity does not define me" and "not a single act of love is squandered."
Yes! Because of His lavish love for us, we can give love lavishly, too!
Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024
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Thank you, big sister. I doubt it will win but it comes from the heart. Your opinion means a lot to me.
Love
Marival
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned in soulful imagery. Yes, God's love is unconditional. No matter what we do, God will still love us.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of note:
You suffered for all my sin
and you'll continue to love me
U N C O N D I T I O N A L L Y
Gorgeous presentation. A pleasure to read. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is beautifully penned in soulful imagery. Yes, God's love is unconditional. No matter what we do, God will still love us.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of note:
You suffered for all my sin
and you'll continue to love me
U N C O N D I T I O N A L L Y
Gorgeous presentation. A pleasure to read. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Margaret 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. My Sunday School lesson today was on Romans 5. Your poem fits it nicely. Yes, because we sinned God gave us Jesus to wipe that sin away and give us hope. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. My Sunday School lesson today was on Romans 5. Your poem fits it nicely. Yes, because we sinned God gave us Jesus to wipe that sin away and give us hope. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. 😊
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. I deeply loved this poem because you specially showed your love for God and His Son, Jesus Christ. His Son died for us so that we may be saved. Amen. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. I deeply loved this poem because you specially showed your love for God and His Son, Jesus Christ. His Son died for us so that we may be saved. Amen. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Aryr. I'm grateful for the exceptional six stars review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Douglas Goff
Everyone is good enough in God's eyes. So who are we to judge others? I say worship your beliefs how you feel is appropriate in your heart.
By the way, you are always good enough in my eyes too! Your writing is such a joy. I'm glad to know you! Great piece!
Douglas.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Everyone is good enough in God's eyes. So who are we to judge others? I say worship your beliefs how you feel is appropriate in your heart.
By the way, you are always good enough in my eyes too! Your writing is such a joy. I'm glad to know you! Great piece!
Douglas.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Have a great night, Douglas.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh, Sweetie, I always try to save a six and then go look for a masterpiece on Saturday. It doesn't always end up that I still have one, but thankfully I do today.
God's love poured out of you on this. I have tears in my eyes because it is so beautifully done. The writing is as gorgeous as the art and the whole beautiful package is like the best thing I have seen all week.. the hell with the people who would put you down for these kinds of posts. They don't matter. You matter more to me and so many others. And your post is beyond wonderful. Thank you for making my week as I needed this today.
Bless you, my dear friend.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Oh, Sweetie, I always try to save a six and then go look for a masterpiece on Saturday. It doesn't always end up that I still have one, but thankfully I do today.
God's love poured out of you on this. I have tears in my eyes because it is so beautifully done. The writing is as gorgeous as the art and the whole beautiful package is like the best thing I have seen all week.. the hell with the people who would put you down for these kinds of posts. They don't matter. You matter more to me and so many others. And your post is beyond wonderful. Thank you for making my week as I needed this today.
Bless you, my dear friend.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review, Debi. Your words mean a lot to me.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
yea, i've had a few "christian reviews"...
eh, i usually shrug it off...
this was a great faith poem
loved the stanza about the altar
and how simple it is...
the repeating "unconditionally" worked well
and the flow was smooth
though i'm not sure about the dashes before the lines in the second stanza - but that could be just me lol
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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yea, i've had a few "christian reviews"...
eh, i usually shrug it off...
this was a great faith poem
loved the stanza about the altar
and how simple it is...
the repeating "unconditionally" worked well
and the flow was smooth
though i'm not sure about the dashes before the lines in the second stanza - but that could be just me lol
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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thank you, Shelley, I got rid of the dashes
gypsy hugs