Church of the Stunned Chicken
A Minute Poetry Contest Entry13 total reviews
Comment from QC Poet
Out my way there is a chicken franchise called Church's Chicken this would be a great promotion picture for them. Your funny and conforming Minute poem is one of the best ones I've come . Good Luck and Blessings to you.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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Out my way there is a chicken franchise called Church's Chicken this would be a great promotion picture for them. Your funny and conforming Minute poem is one of the best ones I've come . Good Luck and Blessings to you.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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We have Church's Chicken here in Georgia as well This was a very fun poem to write, although it was quite challenging. I appreciate your complimentary review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I found it on Pinterest. I have it in my photo file. I will find someplace to use it. You have a nice and silly poem. The name alone is worth the read. I am thinking about writing a contest called" Let's kill Karen" you can kill me with kindness, roll me over with a steam roller, have me fighting with my support hose and tumbling down the stairs, but it must make me laugh.
I have mentioned it to others and they said they would be happy to kill me. Is that a bad thing?:-)
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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I found it on Pinterest. I have it in my photo file. I will find someplace to use it. You have a nice and silly poem. The name alone is worth the read. I am thinking about writing a contest called" Let's kill Karen" you can kill me with kindness, roll me over with a steam roller, have me fighting with my support hose and tumbling down the stairs, but it must make me laugh.
I have mentioned it to others and they said they would be happy to kill me. Is that a bad thing?:-)
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2024
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What a unique and fascinating subject for a contest. It's a great idea!...go for it! I look forward to following it with great interest. Thanks for your review.
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I hope you write something very dignified ala Peter Wimsey. Karen
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like your poem. Wouldn't it be wild if a church had windows that could see? Like your poem, does the church look like a chicken that has a face, and is located in Florida?
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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I like your poem. Wouldn't it be wild if a church had windows that could see? Like your poem, does the church look like a chicken that has a face, and is located in Florida?
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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I'm not sure where the church is but it has provided loads of entertainment and laughs. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Sally Law
This is hilarious! How in the world did you find this photo? Wonderful poem in minute form. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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This is hilarious! How in the world did you find this photo? Wonderful poem in minute form. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you. I think I first saw it on Facebook and then found it with Google images. It just begged someone to write about. I appreciate your review and best wishes.
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Most welcome. So much fub! Sal :))
Comment from Jeano
They have to make me laugh or cry, say awe or sigh, to get that coveted 6th star. You got it with this. I laughed out loud. I saw the photo first and thought, what an odd building. Then I read your poem and saw what you saw. Good job!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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They have to make me laugh or cry, say awe or sigh, to get that coveted 6th star. You got it with this. I laughed out loud. I saw the photo first and thought, what an odd building. Then I read your poem and saw what you saw. Good job!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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I'm honored that I got your coveted 6th star. I still laugh every time I look at the photo. It's the gift that keeps on giving. I really appreciate your review and kind comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is a strange looking building;
it would be hard to keep a straight face going in it.
-A nice presentation and a well written minute poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The second verse is my favorite with
"windows that can see" and "Is this a pun?"
-A very good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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-That is a strange looking building;
it would be hard to keep a straight face going in it.
-A nice presentation and a well written minute poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-The second verse is my favorite with
"windows that can see" and "Is this a pun?"
-A very good concluding verse.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Pam. The image of this little church just begged to be described. A very fun write, though difficult to stay within the rules. There is so much more I could say. Thanks for the review.
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You are welcome, and you did stay within the rules and still wrote a fun poem.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post. Perhaps the church is looking accusingly, saying, Why aren't you at church this morning?...or last week for that matter! Beautifully wrutten, this is an excellent post my friend, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent post. Perhaps the church is looking accusingly, saying, Why aren't you at church this morning?...or last week for that matter! Beautifully wrutten, this is an excellent post my friend, good luck in the contest, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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A fun write but hard to stay within the lines. Thanks for your review.
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Bless you
Comment from John Ciarmello
Haha! I can't stop looking at this photo. Who says God doesn't have a sense of humor or, at the very least, collects clucks?
This was an enjoyable read and fit perfectly into the humor of the photo.
Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Haha! I can't stop looking at this photo. Who says God doesn't have a sense of humor or, at the very least, collects clucks?
This was an enjoyable read and fit perfectly into the humor of the photo.
Best, JohnC
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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This photo begged for something. It was a fun write but hard to fit into the rules. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Caroline M England
A challenging format to write and tell a story. Great subject for a poem and enjoyable to read. Rhythm and meter works well. Well done.
My only suggestion would be about the story and how it could flow in a stronger way. But you have my admiration - not sure I could write in this format!
Best wishes
Caroline
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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A challenging format to write and tell a story. Great subject for a poem and enjoyable to read. Rhythm and meter works well. Well done.
My only suggestion would be about the story and how it could flow in a stronger way. But you have my admiration - not sure I could write in this format!
Best wishes
Caroline
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Caroline. This was a challenge for sure. I appreciate your review and kind words.
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My pleasure!
Best wishes
Caroline
Comment from Douglas Goff
What a great rhyming pattern. I like the way you used perfect rhyming words that fit and didn't seem forced. Great job here.
This is an enjoyable read.
D
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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What a great rhyming pattern. I like the way you used perfect rhyming words that fit and didn't seem forced. Great job here.
This is an enjoyable read.
D
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you. This was quite a challenge but an enjoyable one. I appreciate your review.
