2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine haiku, Gypsy....and I can relate to the turtle....sometimes that's the way some of life's challenges look to me. I tell myself just one step at a time, but sometimes you wish you could take the ski lift to the summit!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Another fine haiku, Gypsy....and I can relate to the turtle....sometimes that's the way some of life's challenges look to me. I tell myself just one step at a time, but sometimes you wish you could take the ski lift to the summit!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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thank you, Mike :)
gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
No matter what we do we need to take one step at a time. That's just part of life. And then when we need to change a behavior the one step at a time is our anthem call. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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No matter what we do we need to take one step at a time. That's just part of life. And then when we need to change a behavior the one step at a time is our anthem call. I enjoyed this entire presentation. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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thank you, Barbara,
gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
hmm... never heard of a quote haiku!
perfect quote to go with your haiku
one day, one hour, one minute. . . one step at a time...
good luck to the little turtle!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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hmm... never heard of a quote haiku!
perfect quote to go with your haiku
one day, one hour, one minute. . . one step at a time...
good luck to the little turtle!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Shelley,
gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That helps to break things into steps because a foot journey to Mt. Fuji looks impossible but we can take our small steps faithfully and be surprised at our progress. Great quote!!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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That helps to break things into steps because a foot journey to Mt. Fuji looks impossible but we can take our small steps faithfully and be surprised at our progress. Great quote!!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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hehe.. poor little turtle, but he has a good attitude, that goes a long way.
thank you, big sister. Have fun with your granddaughter.
love,
marival
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. We started talking about a little turtle then moved on Mount Fuji beckoning, then we have a long ways to go. Very well done and immensely enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!! The picture was great.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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What a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. We started talking about a little turtle then moved on Mount Fuji beckoning, then we have a long ways to go. Very well done and immensely enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!! The picture was great.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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thank you very much, aryr, bleesed be
gypsy hugs :)
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Douglas Goff
That is quite interesting. The Haiga seems much like advertising!
This would be a very cool contest idea. Does the Haiku need to be nature?
Good stuff !
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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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That is quite interesting. The Haiga seems much like advertising!
This would be a very cool contest idea. Does the Haiku need to be nature?
Good stuff !
D
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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thank you very much, Douglas :)
gypsy hugs
"Beware of artists, they mix with all classes of society and are therefore most dangerous." - Queen Victoria.
Comment from royowen
I love this, a little turtle can't walk very quickly, it would indeed be a long journey, so it's a great satori with a few varied aha moments, it would make for a great novel, because Mi Fuji is sacred, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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I love this, a little turtle can't walk very quickly, it would indeed be a long journey, so it's a great satori with a few varied aha moments, it would make for a great novel, because Mi Fuji is sacred, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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hehe ... thank you very much, Roy :)
gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
You have done this very well, and it reads well. When it is put over the picture, the reader does not read it for me. I have to enlarge it enough to where I am able to read it with my poor vision. I wish you the very best.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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You have done this very well, and it reads well. When it is put over the picture, the reader does not read it for me. I have to enlarge it enough to where I am able to read it with my poor vision. I wish you the very best.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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thank you, Patricia, sorry I forgot to write it in black font for you
gypsy hugs