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Shrouded

One line poem

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Comment from Wendy G
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Probably. Truth is one of the first casualties and provides the most severe losses when war is imminent or in progress. A thoughtful one-liner. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
    Thanks Wendy G for reading and sharing;
Comment from rspoet
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This is an excellent one line story for the contest.
Truth is that war has been around most of the entire history of man.
Perhaps truth will one day win out and peace will return.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2024
    yes we seem to be enmeshed in wars these times! Thanks for reviewing zanya