Vivid in my Mind
Poem using words: Graphic-joy-spice -death3 total reviews
Comment from Gunner Lil
A great job with using all the words.
An easy read. This poem has a excellent flow and pace. Love the picture you used.
Good luck with the contest and thank you.
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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A great job with using all the words.
An easy read. This poem has a excellent flow and pace. Love the picture you used.
Good luck with the contest and thank you.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your kind review and for your time Gunner!- Bless - Thank you for your service!
Comment from RFL
Interesting how you combined the contest words into your poem. I loved the image that so vivedly expressed your theme. Good luck in the contest!
Best,
RFL
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Interesting how you combined the contest words into your poem. I loved the image that so vivedly expressed your theme. Good luck in the contest!
Best,
RFL
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank You so much for your kind review and for your time RFL! - Bless
Comment from Yusita
This was a prompt I didn't even try to take on because it is definitely a difficult one... in my opinion, anyway. But my, how you've done so, and beautifully as well as creatively. My favorite part was "joy, the spice of time". I never thought of joy in this way, but I love it!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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This was a prompt I didn't even try to take on because it is definitely a difficult one... in my opinion, anyway. But my, how you've done so, and beautifully as well as creatively. My favorite part was "joy, the spice of time". I never thought of joy in this way, but I love it!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Yusita for your kind review and for your time!! - Bless - At my age the conservation of words is my only option! HaHa
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Haha. I forgot to mention that--great job with saying all that with so few words!