Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with vivid imagery--I love poppies.

I especially liked:
tucked in cozy flower bed.
(Good satori line.)

Gorgeous photo and presentation. Well done. Xo. M

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Margaret (*÷*)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I remember seeing the poppy fields in Germany. I don't see as many poppy fields in the US. Once in a while, but nothing like Germany. They were beautiful over there. Thank you for sharing this poem that reminds me of their beauty.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

In Spain we have a lot of red poppies. They are so pretty .

Thank you very much, Barbara (*÷*)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

mmm love caramel...
this was a tasty little poem
like strawberries with drizzled caramel :)

cool imagery - never though of a rising or setting sun as caramel before - interesting thought!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley (*÷*)

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

As always you know how to string pearls of literature to shape these wonderful short form poetry to fit the page and the circumstance of your adept choosing, well dine, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Roy.

Gypsy hugs

reply by royowen on 24-Jan-2024

Well done

reply by royowen on 24-Jan-2024

Well done

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I like the word play of "flower bed" for the place where the flowers grow and a sleeping place "bed" for sleepy flowers.
You might want to divide that second line to be two lines.
Great use of personification, too!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. I'm happy you got it.

Love
Marival