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Temp 103

a Naani poetic form

4 total reviews 
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Melissa,
You did dazzle me with your wit with this one. I hope you you get well soon and the stone gets lifted from your chest an you can breathe easy again at a normal body temperature.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
May your day get better and better.
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 02-Feb-2024
    Thank you so much Joan!

    Melissa
reply by dragonpoet on 03-Feb-2024
    Don't mention it, Melissa.
    Joan
Comment from Jeano
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I can relate to this. We've all been there a time or two or more. It does interfere with our thinking, especially with the creativity part of our brains. Don't we all wish we could "dazzle" with wit? Good Luck

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
    Thank you Jeano.

    Melissa
Comment from jessizero
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I don't know why you think this is pitiful! I really liked it, and I can relate to the sentiment you described. Having a rock on one's chest is a good description of emotion. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful comments and fun reply. Still under the weather from Influenza A, but getting better Hugs, Jess!!!

    Melissa
Comment from Julie Helms
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I find it amazing that you can even put two words together with a temperature of 103. And you did it very nicely! Be well and I'm thinking chicken soup for you! Julie

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
    Thanks so much, Julie