Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Peshwari is my favourite and I love that sweet taste of bread with a spicy curry, you have my tastebuds tingling here and I enjoyed your unique Naani, you won my vote, love Dolly

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2024

Thank you so much, Dolly! :)

Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

The picture didn't load right away, showing me only the words. My mouth watered thinking of the deliousness and then the picture loaded reinforcing it even more. Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you! :)

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Well, you've made me hungry! This is a delightful Naani highlighting the basic bread of India. I can smell the garlic and taste the spices. Well fine!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you, June! :)

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Ooooh, naan -- I love it, and this clever little poem is making me hungry. What a play on the format! If I send you my address will you send me the naan? (LOL) Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Ha! Thank you! :)

reply by Dawn Munro on 24-Jan-2024

My pleasure. :)

Comment from Jeano

Excellent

Yes, indeed they look yummy. The words I'm familiar with had no problem, but found it overall very hard to read. The font didn't work for me, but, the message did. Good Luck!

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thanks so much! I normally avoid using that font as it is challenging to read, but I felt it fit this particular piece with its shorter length. :)

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

This is a delicious naani poem. You've gone and made me hungry. Delightful entry, mystery poet. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you so much - I ordered one from Menulog straight after writing this! :)

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Could you clarify the font? I'm having difficulty in reading and clarifying the words. It looks like a delicious dessert of some sort. Yummy to the tummy! I will rate it higher after revising the font.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

All right - I'll hold you to that. Naan is a very well-known Indian bread.

reply by Rosemary Everson1 on 24-Jan-2024

done.

Comment from BenThrone

Excellent

OMG--I was totally going to do this! I mean, you kinda have to, right?! Naan is sooo delicious, in all its wonderful varieties, and you have captured that very well here. This poem left my mouth watering. But you left out my favorite--bullet naan! Unfortunate name, but I love the chili heat. Well, I guess I know what I'll be having for dinner tonight!

Great poem, and I wish you good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Bullet naan - I've never heard of that! Maybe they don't make it in Australia. I'm no good with chilli, unfortunately ... :)

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Excellent writing and presentation! My mom used to brush on melted butter that way, so it brought back memories for me. I'm not familiar with this poetic style so I will read more about it, but I enjoyed reviewing your work. Best wishes!

Alex

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you so much! :)

Comment from Wy Jung

Exceptional

So clever! Naan Naani!
Now I am hungry.
This was well implemented. Love the word play, the description is spot on and the picture makes my mouth water. I can envision this winning hands down. Well done. ~WY

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024

Thank you so much for your generous six stars! I ordered a naan via Menulog after writing this one. :)