2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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7 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. Who wouldn't enjoy a tangerine sky? I know I would. Here in Texas we get beautiful sunsets, but they normally have different shades of pink in them.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful presentation with us. Who wouldn't enjoy a tangerine sky? I know I would. Here in Texas we get beautiful sunsets, but they normally have different shades of pink in them.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara (*÷*)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
A the poor fisherman didn't catch anything if his boat is empty and the only thing that fills it is the tangerine color of dusk. Lovely way to describe it all.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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A the poor fisherman didn't catch anything if his boat is empty and the only thing that fills it is the tangerine color of dusk. Lovely way to describe it all.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Gloria ....
A gorgeous presentation, and a most interesting zen haiku. I like that term. But sadly the fisherman didn't come home with a boat full of fish.
Much enjoyed this one, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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A gorgeous presentation, and a most interesting zen haiku. I like that term. But sadly the fisherman didn't come home with a boat full of fish.
Much enjoyed this one, Gypsy. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a lovely poem. You have a very creative way of description. In this one is "net full of dusk." I love that phrase and the way the fisherman is veiled on his empty boat. Just grand!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is a lovely poem. You have a very creative way of description. In this one is "net full of dusk." I love that phrase and the way the fisherman is veiled on his empty boat. Just grand!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Verna, I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
aw fishies weren't biting... he'll have to order in LOL
great haiku with excellent imagery
and the picture is perfect!
smooth flow and line connection and cool satori
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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aw fishies weren't biting... he'll have to order in LOL
great haiku with excellent imagery
and the picture is perfect!
smooth flow and line connection and cool satori
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley, I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Yardier
Beautiful imagery by your words and by the photograph. At first, I thought the type of fish in the photo was called a 'Dusk', and the fisherman had a whole net of them. So good for the village! However, that thought went by the wayside when I read your notes. The poem and the photograph really came alive then with depth and meaning. I like it a lot.
Yard
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Beautiful imagery by your words and by the photograph. At first, I thought the type of fish in the photo was called a 'Dusk', and the fisherman had a whole net of them. So good for the village! However, that thought went by the wayside when I read your notes. The poem and the photograph really came alive then with depth and meaning. I like it a lot.
Yard
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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A fish name dusk... that would be poetic.
Thank you very much, Yard, I appreciate your kind
Comment from Navada
I love the beautiful actions of the gorgeous sky here in veiling the fisherman, even as the light recedes from his empty net. It's such a vivid colour and it evokes a memory of slightly acidic taste as well, as we think of the tangerine fruit. Lovely sensory writing! :)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I love the beautiful actions of the gorgeous sky here in veiling the fisherman, even as the light recedes from his empty net. It's such a vivid colour and it evokes a memory of slightly acidic taste as well, as we think of the tangerine fruit. Lovely sensory writing! :)
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Navada, I
appreciate your kind review and feedback.
Gypsy hugs