Rainbows in Verse
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Winter Shadows"Various forms of poetry
6 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is very beautifully worded, and you have presented it in a lovely manner. I wish you the very best with the contest. May you have a lovely day and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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This is very beautifully worded, and you have presented it in a lovely manner. I wish you the very best with the contest. May you have a lovely day and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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HI Patricia, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Yusita
This is an excellent entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest. The imagery and creative descriptions are unique and magical. Well done and good luck to you!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent entry for the 20 Syllable Poem contest. The imagery and creative descriptions are unique and magical. Well done and good luck to you!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Dear Yusita, thank you for your comments, review. and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These stark scenes are a familiar sight in winter and they can also be magical too as you brought this scene to life with your fine description here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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These stark scenes are a familiar sight in winter and they can also be magical too as you brought this scene to life with your fine description here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Hi Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna xxx
Comment from Baltimore Born
This poem is well crafted. Your words flowed together well. Your first three words opens this poem well. Your twenty-syllable count is good. There appears to be no wasted words. Your last line closes the poem well. Your picture accentuates this poem well. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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This poem is well crafted. Your words flowed together well. Your first three words opens this poem well. Your twenty-syllable count is good. There appears to be no wasted words. Your last line closes the poem well. Your picture accentuates this poem well. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Dear Baltimore Born, thank you for your exceptional rating! and your review comments. Dove
Comment from papa55mike
The long morning and evening shadows are always full of inspiration. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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The long morning and evening shadows are always full of inspiration. What a wonderfully written poem and I love the picture. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Hi Mike, thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
It is wonderful to be inspired by nature around us and for us to have that sort of observational strength. I seem to do that too. It worked well for you because it led you to write an excellent 20 syllable poem that is good for the challenge. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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It is wonderful to be inspired by nature around us and for us to have that sort of observational strength. I seem to do that too. It worked well for you because it led you to write an excellent 20 syllable poem that is good for the challenge. I enjoyed reviewing this.
Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Hi Alex, thank you for your comments and review. Dove