Our Lasting Love
a 5-7-5 Romance14 total reviews
Comment from 1Dreamer
Congratulations on your win! The picture is the perfect complement to your work, which is beautifully expressed in such a short poem. All the best to you.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Congratulations on your win! The picture is the perfect complement to your work, which is beautifully expressed in such a short poem. All the best to you.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so very much! I so appreciate your comments!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Sorry to have missed this Melissa. A beautiful love poem in short verse 5-7-5 form. Sending you my best today as always and my best congratulations on your blue ribbon.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Sorry to have missed this Melissa. A beautiful love poem in short verse 5-7-5 form. Sending you my best today as always and my best congratulations on your blue ribbon.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much, Sally
Melissa
Comment from Dawn Munro
The kind of love you describe in your lovely 5-7-5 poem is not as rare as one might think at first -- time has a way of softening hearts.
But how you describe it IS rare. I am not surprised this was a winning entry. Congratulations!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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The kind of love you describe in your lovely 5-7-5 poem is not as rare as one might think at first -- time has a way of softening hearts.
But how you describe it IS rare. I am not surprised this was a winning entry. Congratulations!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much, my friend. So appreciate you Dawn
Melissa
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I knew this was the winner the first time I read it; I honestly did. Congratulations on the award. It is SO totally deserving for its beauty and nostalgia and love-tones throughout, replete with THE perfect artwork. xoxo
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I knew this was the winner the first time I read it; I honestly did. Congratulations on the award. It is SO totally deserving for its beauty and nostalgia and love-tones throughout, replete with THE perfect artwork. xoxo
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Good evening Rachelle... I am delighted you liked this little love poem. I hope Roy and I are like that when we age :)
Melissa
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That would be bliss!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on winning thi scontest Melissa and I enjoyed the romantic love between these two geriatric lovers, a fun post and a winner here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Congratulations on winning thi scontest Melissa and I enjoyed the romantic love between these two geriatric lovers, a fun post and a winner here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you Dolly!!
Melissa
Comment from Gunner Lil
A great job for the 5-7-5 contest.
A very easy read that has a nice flow and pace. With so little you covered a lot of love.
Thank you, and good luck.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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A great job for the 5-7-5 contest.
A very easy read that has a nice flow and pace. With so little you covered a lot of love.
Thank you, and good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet!
I love everything about this beautiful poem from the wording to the touching artwork.
My favourite words are:
Slowly melding our hearts and inseparable
You get my vote but also a six star review because the poem is exceptional.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Ciao poet!
I love everything about this beautiful poem from the wording to the touching artwork.
My favourite words are:
Slowly melding our hearts and inseparable
You get my vote but also a six star review because the poem is exceptional.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Hello dear Franca. Thank you very much for your wonderful support and review. Hugs to you!!
Melissa
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love both the picture and the words of your 5-7-5 poem. Love does continue o even through the wrinkles and aches and pains and you've shown that beautifully.
Loved this and wish you luck in the contest.
Cheers
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I love both the picture and the words of your 5-7-5 poem. Love does continue o even through the wrinkles and aches and pains and you've shown that beautifully.
Loved this and wish you luck in the contest.
Cheers
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Hello Valda... thank you so much for your insight and thoughtful review. I appreciate your wonderful review!!
Melissa
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Delightful! I love the black and white image reflected so sweetly in your 5-7-5 which flows and enchants, capturing the brief of the contest, romance. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Delightful! I love the black and white image reflected so sweetly in your 5-7-5 which flows and enchants, capturing the brief of the contest, romance. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much Debbie
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When you get older, you either grow apart or stay together. This couple stayed together and shared their love for one another. Never let anyone get between your love for one another. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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When you get older, you either grow apart or stay together. This couple stayed together and shared their love for one another. Never let anyone get between your love for one another. Like your poem.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much Rosemary!