2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
in the bloodshot sky & red ribbon tied around my broken heart, & words written on soft pebbles stalked in little pillars of grief, These are perfect descriptions the evoke emotion in your readers. Wonderful poem and presentation.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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in the bloodshot sky & red ribbon tied around my broken heart, & words written on soft pebbles stalked in little pillars of grief, These are perfect descriptions the evoke emotion in your readers. Wonderful poem and presentation.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Barbara, you are so kind. I am happy you liked my poem, it comes straight from the heart.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Great picture in each tercet. The "bloodshot sky" gives a feeling about the night - that it's sleepless. The "red ribbon" around the heart shows us the pain it's in, and the words written on the pebbles show us the souvenirs of grief in "little pillars." You make these feelings tangible through these pictures.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Great picture in each tercet. The "bloodshot sky" gives a feeling about the night - that it's sleepless. The "red ribbon" around the heart shows us the pain it's in, and the words written on the pebbles show us the souvenirs of grief in "little pillars." You make these feelings tangible through these pictures.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, big sister. I hope you had a good weekend. I'm happy you think I mad
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Thank you, big sister. I hope you had a good weekend. I'm happy you think I made the feelings tangible, I try.
Love,
Marival
Comment from kahpot
Love reading your work, I seem to be captured in the first few lines, with this one it was (rose) and (bloodshot) that gave me connection, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Love reading your work, I seem to be captured in the first few lines, with this one it was (rose) and (bloodshot) that gave me connection, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
love the whisper of winter breath!
the word written on pebbles was cool too
the imagery was great and the flow was smooth
way cool pics!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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love the whisper of winter breath!
the word written on pebbles was cool too
the imagery was great and the flow was smooth
way cool pics!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
The pictures of the moon were priceless, Gypsy. The blood red of your words showed the intents of your words. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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The pictures of the moon were priceless, Gypsy. The blood red of your words showed the intents of your words. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Aryr. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.