A Fair Cop
Teamwork to catch a fugitive4 total reviews
Comment from Jeano
I read it once and thought, what? Yes, I'm slow. The second time I read it is when I had to LOL, at myself for not picking up on it was a dog telling the story. Well done, especially after my duh moment. Good Luck!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I read it once and thought, what? Yes, I'm slow. The second time I read it is when I had to LOL, at myself for not picking up on it was a dog telling the story. Well done, especially after my duh moment. Good Luck!
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Thanks for reading and commenting. Pleased you liked it :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Capturing a criminal is demanding work. You must be in shape to run after a fellow who is trying to escape. He is on the ground, and you are ready to handcuff the guilty person. As you can see, I can envision your story.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Capturing a criminal is demanding work. You must be in shape to run after a fellow who is trying to escape. He is on the ground, and you are ready to handcuff the guilty person. As you can see, I can envision your story.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I'm pleased you got into it so far, given its length. thanks for reading and reviewing :)
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nicely done. Mirrors and smoke. I really thought we had us a sexist cop calling his partner 'Blondie". Exactly the way you played it.
Good luck in the 80 Word Flash Fiction Contest. This competition is wrought with talent. Including you!
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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Nicely done. Mirrors and smoke. I really thought we had us a sexist cop calling his partner 'Blondie". Exactly the way you played it.
Good luck in the 80 Word Flash Fiction Contest. This competition is wrought with talent. Including you!
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Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you for reading, and commenting. My first post on here... :)
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Welcome aboard! This site is what YOU make of it!
Comment from royowen
Of course, this is the definition of a good work and the ideal style quite suited to these flash fiction contests, that of a great flourish and an unexpected ending just like this one, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Of course, this is the definition of a good work and the ideal style quite suited to these flash fiction contests, that of a great flourish and an unexpected ending just like this one, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you for reading, and commenting. :) My first post on here...
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Well done