Comment from
jessizero
This was a great piece of flash fiction. You did a great job describing everything with such a strict word limit. I especially liked the last line. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
Thanks for taking the time to read and provide feedback.
Comment from
kahpot
Excellent, it never ceases to amaze me how the most common views
(blue sky) are taken for granted, we do seem to take notice if we think we will no longer see them, very well written and best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
Thanks for the encouraging review. Appreciated.