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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Although your life has been a traumatic and unstable one, there is no doubt about how much you have learned about yourself in your adult years. And self-knowledge, as you know, is that important first step. I actually read from your posts a strong and assertive lady who has been helped on her journey by a wonderful person called Mason. Together you form an inviolable bond, I deeply hope. This is another of your excellently expressed and thought-provoking verse. The only suggestion I would make, so that your evocative sentiments stand out to the full is to, perhaps, change the colour of your background. It's quite dark and challenging for anyone who's visually impaired on this site and that, in turn, might deter reviewers. This is worthy of significant response and approval. Take care Debbie
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Although your life has been a traumatic and unstable one, there is no doubt about how much you have learned about yourself in your adult years. And self-knowledge, as you know, is that important first step. I actually read from your posts a strong and assertive lady who has been helped on her journey by a wonderful person called Mason. Together you form an inviolable bond, I deeply hope. This is another of your excellently expressed and thought-provoking verse. The only suggestion I would make, so that your evocative sentiments stand out to the full is to, perhaps, change the colour of your background. It's quite dark and challenging for anyone who's visually impaired on this site and that, in turn, might deter reviewers. This is worthy of significant response and approval. Take care Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When children are manipulated at a young age they know no other way to live and only when they become an adult does the reality dawn. But as an adult they have the power change their situation and they should run with the ball and never look back, I hope you can overcome the past and have a good life, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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When children are manipulated at a young age they know no other way to live and only when they become an adult does the reality dawn. But as an adult they have the power change their situation and they should run with the ball and never look back, I hope you can overcome the past and have a good life, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much Dolly! I am writing from the back of my journals available to me now. So I am coming to the surface within each writing through these years! I am starting from a new chapter in my life now, though I am working from the start of this different journey of my life, that has lead me to this other journey; and what opened my mind and vision of the truth people have never seen. I have kept these thoughts and spectrums to myself and only certain humans have heard or read a few of them but it is making it easier for me by putting these in order for my book to be easier to type out in Word. Now I'll have a rough draft that can't easily be lost already together by sharing it with others. It also teaches me what to be cautious of and what I should be aware of by gathering reviews & rough criticism from other strangers whom don't know who I am nor have a biased opinion. I truly appreciate your thoughts dollface & I appreciate everything and all responses because it shows me how certain veiwers see it.
