Beginning of The End of The End
Will you be ready?5 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
I am singing right along with her. Also love a banjo.
A very different and imaginative 80 word story. I was surprised, however, at the word "smile" after all that bad stuff had happened. I know what you meant, but still, with the situation you introduced, it wouldn't seem conducive to smiling.(to me)
However we're still singing. Fun. Thanks!
Katharine
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I am singing right along with her. Also love a banjo.
A very different and imaginative 80 word story. I was surprised, however, at the word "smile" after all that bad stuff had happened. I know what you meant, but still, with the situation you introduced, it wouldn't seem conducive to smiling.(to me)
However we're still singing. Fun. Thanks!
Katharine
Comment Written 05-Feb-2024
Comment from Jeano
Ah, the blame game never stops. It might take the apocalypse to awaken the masses. Those left behind will still be pointing fingers. Well done. I liked it.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Ah, the blame game never stops. It might take the apocalypse to awaken the masses. Those left behind will still be pointing fingers. Well done. I liked it.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thank you! I trust you are on the winning side!
Comment from Tetamarina66
This is really good. As I had read this piece of fiction surrounding the events in the story, I am wondering if it could happen in real life too?
Just catching up on reading some of your stuff when I should be doing housework and such. We still have snow left from the snowstorm we had 3 days ago. It is slowly melting the snow I mean but its still yuck out there.
We hardly get snow here where I am and when it snows the whole city goes into damn chao's nobody knows how to drive in the snow, accidents happens etc.
Hope you are feeling better.
Surprised myself by creating a new non fiction book and had managed to write something.
Since you enjoy my writing and feel I am very talented its what keeps me coming here even motivated to write even if I may end up running out of things to say or write about. Because honestly when I deleted my fiction story The Meeting I wasn't sure if I was going to come back on here much since I felt kind of discouraged after always hearing how much errors there was in the chapters despite my trying to fix some of them.
You yourself didn't discourage me, its just that I do not like how much time and energy it takes for someone like myself to try to edit a piece of writing which can last hours and even the whole day or night. And as I gotten older my patience for things just really gotten kind of low.
Anyhow just catching up on things at your end on here. It's really hard for me to review peoples writings on here since I know nothing about writing in general the only thing I know how to say if I like the piece of writing. The only reason I don't mention any errors is because I don't see any when reading peoples stuff. All I care whether or not I am enjoying what I happen to be reading. Anyhow your a good writer, how do you manage to write without any errors. I think you write better than I do.
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This is really good. As I had read this piece of fiction surrounding the events in the story, I am wondering if it could happen in real life too?
Just catching up on reading some of your stuff when I should be doing housework and such. We still have snow left from the snowstorm we had 3 days ago. It is slowly melting the snow I mean but its still yuck out there.
We hardly get snow here where I am and when it snows the whole city goes into damn chao's nobody knows how to drive in the snow, accidents happens etc.
Hope you are feeling better.
Surprised myself by creating a new non fiction book and had managed to write something.
Since you enjoy my writing and feel I am very talented its what keeps me coming here even motivated to write even if I may end up running out of things to say or write about. Because honestly when I deleted my fiction story The Meeting I wasn't sure if I was going to come back on here much since I felt kind of discouraged after always hearing how much errors there was in the chapters despite my trying to fix some of them.
You yourself didn't discourage me, its just that I do not like how much time and energy it takes for someone like myself to try to edit a piece of writing which can last hours and even the whole day or night. And as I gotten older my patience for things just really gotten kind of low.
Anyhow just catching up on things at your end on here. It's really hard for me to review peoples writings on here since I know nothing about writing in general the only thing I know how to say if I like the piece of writing. The only reason I don't mention any errors is because I don't see any when reading peoples stuff. All I care whether or not I am enjoying what I happen to be reading. Anyhow your a good writer, how do you manage to write without any errors. I think you write better than I do.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This reminded me of a very popular book series 15 years or so ago, save for the political element herein. Good luck with your entries. The music was apropos
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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This reminded me of a very popular book series 15 years or so ago, save for the political element herein. Good luck with your entries. The music was apropos
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thank you! My daughter is a fan of the "Left Behind" series, but I have not read any of them.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your poem . The picture and words go together well. Our world has a rude awakening when Jesus comes back. I really like the music of I'll fly away. Great job on this
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your poem . The picture and words go together well. Our world has a rude awakening when Jesus comes back. I really like the music of I'll fly away. Great job on this
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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If I only have a very few words, who else better to use them on but My Savior?