Plato's Cave
Two Line Poem3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Well, I was going to say that I liked how deep this was, but then I was worried that you'd think I was mocking you with the metaphor of cave and deep. So now I'm going to tell you that, while it's so easy with these limited-word prompts to take the shallow way out and write something frivolous, I love the way that you chose, instead, to go thought-provoking and wise.
Super great job here, Mystery Contestant. And that's the case whether you receive no votes or all the votes in the polls. I am duly impressed! Good luck. xo
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Well, I was going to say that I liked how deep this was, but then I was worried that you'd think I was mocking you with the metaphor of cave and deep. So now I'm going to tell you that, while it's so easy with these limited-word prompts to take the shallow way out and write something frivolous, I love the way that you chose, instead, to go thought-provoking and wise.
Super great job here, Mystery Contestant. And that's the case whether you receive no votes or all the votes in the polls. I am duly impressed! Good luck. xo
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for your excellent review Rachelle! So appreciate you, and your comments- Bless
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Profound, eye-catching and with a topical message! I like this allegorical cave and how it relates to our insular, virtual world which actually bears no relation to reality. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Profound, eye-catching and with a topical message! I like this allegorical cave and how it relates to our insular, virtual world which actually bears no relation to reality. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much for your excellent review Debbie- Bless
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I'm Greek so I will read more about this. I think your Author Note helps support your well written two line poem. This image supports your words also. Best wishes to you in the contest!
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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I'm Greek so I will read more about this. I think your Author Note helps support your well written two line poem. This image supports your words also. Best wishes to you in the contest!
Alex
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much Alex for your kind review- Bess - One of my favorite writings !!
