The Care of Children
Adults are not the sole observers of life.4 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
We never know what goes on behind closed doors, and when there is a drunk in the house the odds of abuse or violence escalates dramatically. Personally, I'll never understand why anyone drinks someone that cause their IQ to drop from hero to zero in a short period. Thanks for sharing another fine post.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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We never know what goes on behind closed doors, and when there is a drunk in the house the odds of abuse or violence escalates dramatically. Personally, I'll never understand why anyone drinks someone that cause their IQ to drop from hero to zero in a short period. Thanks for sharing another fine post.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Appreciate comments as usual. Thank you for being a loyal reader. Hope your winter isn't too cold.
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It's always a pleasure to read whatever you write. Keep dry and warm . . . comfy as you can. :-)
Comment from William Stephenson1
I just entered a story for this contest, and I dare not compare mine with yours. This is a remarkable piece. I found no issues of spelling or grammar. Your story makes me wonder if this is fictional or nonfictional because it is so realistic and relevant. All the best in the contest.
Bill Stephenson, PhD
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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I just entered a story for this contest, and I dare not compare mine with yours. This is a remarkable piece. I found no issues of spelling or grammar. Your story makes me wonder if this is fictional or nonfictional because it is so realistic and relevant. All the best in the contest.
Bill Stephenson, PhD
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the kind words and stars. Don't let my effort affect faith in your work. I don't think my story is tight enough. Good luck in your writings.
Comment from Nicki Nance
The story and writing kept me engaged from beginning to end. Your characters are well developed and there are several enbedded stories about the relationships. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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The story and writing kept me engaged from beginning to end. Your characters are well developed and there are several enbedded stories about the relationships. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thank you for the appreciative words and accompanying stars. Good luck with your writing.
Comment from royowen
There's a lot going on here, but it seems To me there's something of contrasts, and in many ways resembles the strivings of folk not only now but in any age, and the sherrif is a good father and hubby, and loved the comment about his once incredibly injured thigh with a bayonet, and he's declared damaged goods, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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There's a lot going on here, but it seems To me there's something of contrasts, and in many ways resembles the strivings of folk not only now but in any age, and the sherrif is a good father and hubby, and loved the comment about his once incredibly injured thigh with a bayonet, and he's declared damaged goods, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Your perception is on point ... my original small story idea kind of exploded on me. I always appreciate finding a review from you when I wake up.
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Well done
