Acrostic (came the darkness)
Prostate-My Friend's Journey15 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Your acrostic poem is good, every line tells how the person feel and taking a test could have prevented this or helped it.
Going down a road when you are sick is like being in the dark, hoping one day will see the light.
Good luck with your acrostic poem.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Your acrostic poem is good, every line tells how the person feel and taking a test could have prevented this or helped it.
Going down a road when you are sick is like being in the dark, hoping one day will see the light.
Good luck with your acrostic poem.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your exceptional review and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Health is so important, I'm sorry for your friend 's Prostate cancer.... I'm assuming. Excellent acrostic form. Nice presentation.
Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by
reason." - Novalis
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Health is so important, I'm sorry for your friend 's Prostate cancer.... I'm assuming. Excellent acrostic form. Nice presentation.
Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by
reason." - Novalis
Comment Written 22-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Gypsy, for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
:Soothing visions replace my grief" is an awesome line. Your words are true and aid anyone on a grief journey. Excellent acrostic form that has a smooth and vivid use of words. "Absorbing light, my future's source" is another strong line that gives hope. Excellent poem about a journey that I hope ends well for this individual.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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:Soothing visions replace my grief" is an awesome line. Your words are true and aid anyone on a grief journey. Excellent acrostic form that has a smooth and vivid use of words. "Absorbing light, my future's source" is another strong line that gives hope. Excellent poem about a journey that I hope ends well for this individual.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Ulla
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. What a tragic waste that your friend didn't take the test. I gather from your poem he could have been saved had he done so. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. What a tragic waste that your friend didn't take the test. I gather from your poem he could have been saved had he done so. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, yes, if only he took the test, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Allieas
your words are so powerful. It's such a tragedy when something can be prevented but is not. So many "what if's"
Thank you for sharing this evocative poem. Hope you are well
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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your words are so powerful. It's such a tragedy when something can be prevented but is not. So many "what if's"
Thank you for sharing this evocative poem. Hope you are well
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much, for your understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-I didn't know you were in Australia.
-Your notes are appreciated. You are right
about getting the necessary tests even
though it is a scary thing, it is better to know.
-I am sorry about your friend.
-You wrote a very good poem with
effective images and rhyme with good
closing lines about "faith's belief" and "silver linings."
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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-Very good artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-I didn't know you were in Australia.
-Your notes are appreciated. You are right
about getting the necessary tests even
though it is a scary thing, it is better to know.
-I am sorry about your friend.
-You wrote a very good poem with
effective images and rhyme with good
closing lines about "faith's belief" and "silver linings."
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Pam, for your very understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done today, but that isn't new to you, as you write super-fluidly, not superfluously, with regularity. Taking on an acrostic and having rhythm and reason persist is a learned trick.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Well done today, but that isn't new to you, as you write super-fluidly, not superfluously, with regularity. Taking on an acrostic and having rhythm and reason persist is a learned trick.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Tom, I do like the Acrostic form, just wish the topic could be different, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Sugarray77
Good morning Kim. This theme is heart wrenching and you handle it well in your lines. The devastation to families is horrific (my brother died from this) and has far-reaching effects. Thanks for a superbly written Acrostic that brings attention to examinations.
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Good morning Kim. This theme is heart wrenching and you handle it well in your lines. The devastation to families is horrific (my brother died from this) and has far-reaching effects. Thanks for a superbly written Acrostic that brings attention to examinations.
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Melissa, yes, it is so sad, especially knowing it can be prevented, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Very sad. I gather your friend died from prostate cancer? My sister-in-law died a slow and painful death from bowl cancer because she negllected to test with the free kit. Your poem speaks well of the darkness closing in, of the removal of premature smiles as the diagnosis is given. Hope you will find peace and comfort through the silver lining of faith.
Wendy
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Very sad. I gather your friend died from prostate cancer? My sister-in-law died a slow and painful death from bowl cancer because she negllected to test with the free kit. Your poem speaks well of the darkness closing in, of the removal of premature smiles as the diagnosis is given. Hope you will find peace and comfort through the silver lining of faith.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Unfortunately, yes, it is made so easy for us here in AUS. my friend thought it embarrassing to complete such a test, such a shame, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your fine acrostic and I am glad to hear that free tests are now available. I hope your friend recovers. Your poem touches on the devastation at the news here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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I enjoyed your fine acrostic and I am glad to hear that free tests are now available. I hope your friend recovers. Your poem touches on the devastation at the news here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much, unfortunately no recovery, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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How very sad as this can be prevented these days x
