2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
The idea of a boat with a slow leak being sunk by moonlight is cleaver. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. The presentation is beautiful and calming. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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The idea of a boat with a slow leak being sunk by moonlight is cleaver. I enjoyed reading this contest entry. The presentation is beautiful and calming. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful haiku. There was a slow leak that sunk the boat, sunk it always. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful haiku. There was a slow leak that sunk the boat, sunk it always. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Gloria ....
I quite enjoyed this haiku. It's unique, and the thought of the moonlight flooding a boat is fun, even though it's the leak that is causing the boat to sink.
Creates a good satori line sure to draw a smile.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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I quite enjoyed this haiku. It's unique, and the thought of the moonlight flooding a boat is fun, even though it's the leak that is causing the boat to sink.
Creates a good satori line sure to draw a smile.
Wishing you much luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
What a haunting haiku. The boat with its hole taking on moon beams instead of water. The imagery was moody and subtle. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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What a haunting haiku. The boat with its hole taking on moon beams instead of water. The imagery was moody and subtle. Thank you for sharing. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend.
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Comment from lyenochka
That's quite the surprise ending. One expected that the boat was flooded with ocean/lake water but instead it is "flooded with moonlight". I hope that means the boat will stay afloat!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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That's quite the surprise ending. One expected that the boat was flooded with ocean/lake water but instead it is "flooded with moonlight". I hope that means the boat will stay afloat!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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It's a zen concept (*÷*)
Thank you very much, big sister. Have a lovely eve.
Love
Marival
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, this is another lovely and well written Haiku. You used great descriptive words, very amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Gypsy, this is another lovely and well written Haiku. You used great descriptive words, very amazing imagery from the artwork you chose. love and blessings, Teri.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely eve.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
love the "flooded with moonlight"!
cool imagery to think of...
smooth flowing connection
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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love the "flooded with moonlight"!
cool imagery to think of...
smooth flowing connection
thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely eve.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is very interesting. I enjoyed it very much to picture a boat that is slowly sinking because it flooded with moonlight is quite a concept. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best weekend. Patric.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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This is very interesting. I enjoyed it very much to picture a boat that is slowly sinking because it flooded with moonlight is quite a concept. I enjoyed it very much and I wish you the very best weekend. Patric.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely eve.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Iza Deleanu
And the winner is:) YOU, amazing entry: "slow leak,
sinking boat flooded --
with moonligh" Thank you for sharing this masterpiece that is a winner
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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And the winner is:) YOU, amazing entry: "slow leak,
sinking boat flooded --
with moonligh" Thank you for sharing this masterpiece that is a winner
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely eve.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, I really like this Gypsy, that's almost an original though, a boat being sunk by moonlight, that would have to be a first, absolutely brilliant my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Heh heh, I really like this Gypsy, that's almost an original though, a boat being sunk by moonlight, that would have to be a first, absolutely brilliant my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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It's a zen concept.
Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely eve.
Gypsy hugs
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Very clever