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Comment from kahpot
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Love the words as they relate so very well to the artwork, these crows do look like they are scheming, and murder is well within their collection, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words. Have a wonderful day or night.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. Yes, a murder of crows. I guess they would be backstabbers. LOL This was a fun poem to read and an interesting play on words. Great presentation.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
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What a great haiku, a fantastic animal group name, Gypsy. I understand the concept of a 'murder' of crows. It's one of those words that jump out at one. I liked the pictures, they were fantastic. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 20-Jan-2024
    Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Crows are intelligent and fascinating creatures. They have juries that punish offending crows. Very intelligent birds. This was a cool poem you have written. Thanks for sharing your talent. Gretchen

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely eve.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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Cool pictures. And I know you and Dean love the "murder of crows" expression. I like the "blood-red-sunset" description which also alludes to the "murder."

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    We are writing about animals-group names. Yes, dean and I loved crows. They are interesting and mystical birds.

    Thank you, sis.

    Love

    Marival
reply by lyenochka on 19-Jan-2024
    and SO smart!!
Comment from shelley kaye
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crows are interesting to watch...
a great murderous haiku
good imagery and smooth flow
love the satori!

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, my friend. Have a lovely eve.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written, and I enjoyed listening to your notes as well. I had known for a long time that a group of crows was called a murder. How are they ever came up with that is beyond me. It is fascinating to me how they call different groups of different animals by different and unusual names. Patricia.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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This one is genius! I enjoyed reading this, and reviewing your entire image and presentation. The Author Note was full and helpful too.

Love

Alexan

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Alexan. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 19-Jan-2024
    Have a wonderful weekend, too, M!

    Hugs!