Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This twelve-word poem, Choices, has the required word count and leaves us with two paths: the one of positivity and potential, or the other, which is less so.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2024

Thanks for the review

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is very profound and true! There are indeed people who always look on the negative side and seem almost afraid to chill and enjoy the moment. They choose the path they travel. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024

Thank you

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Wow, we have a winer here:) "
'If Happiness ever burdens then Sadness

will be the path most travelled'

what can I add more? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings..

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Yes, good point of clarification. Thank you.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Not sure how happiness can burden and bring sadness here but I expect this is a very personal poem, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

I believe some people don?t have the capacity to enjoy happiness. Thank you for reading.