Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Your dramatic SCREAM is a clever choice for an ending to this small, small poem. A great job on your rhyme choices and I wish you luck in this contest!

Melissa

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Actually, there's a lot of truth in this little poem. I saw the contest this morning, and noted that there was only one spot left and twenty minutes before the contest closed. This was all I could come up with under the circumstances. I could definitely relate to the little guy's dilemma. Thanks for your review and good luck wish.

Comment from PENofFIRE

Excellent

Looks familiar. I love it. I am sure we have all been there at least once in a school time. The artwork is perfect for your cry for help. Best wishes regarding the contest.

God bless, Pen

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thank you so much. I reviewed your profile, and you had me at "weave our words into different fabrics." What a beautiful, beautiful thought! You are truly a gifted writer. I'm honored that you would be so generous as to review my work. Thank you.

reply by PENofFIRE on 22-Jan-2024

Thank you, John, for those kind words.