Comment from artisart4u

Excellent

Your entry is nice and it has the right amount of syllables for each line.
Yes, that graph can mean a lot to a person who is sick or hospitalized.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2024

Thank you! :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A fine play on words here as the graph speak volumes about the heart and how it is monitored by machines, a fun post for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thanks, Dolly! :)

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

This medical take (that we can all relate to as we age) is a clever choice for a small, small poem. A great job on your rhyme choices and I wish you luck in this contest!

Melissa

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thank you! :)

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

This is great! Clever in its fulfillment of the prompt, and all three lines rhyme perfectly. Well done. I find these hard so congrats! And good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thanks so much! :)

Comment from Lisasview

Excellent

First read of yours, whomever you are and I loved it. Clever rhymes...clear thoughts and excellent.
I wish you the very best of luck in the contest.
Lisasview......................

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thanks very much! :)

reply by Lisasview on 17-Jan-2024

You are welcome!
Lisa

Comment from karenina

Excellent

As a retired RN I agree! Clever 1-6-1!
Such a simple noninvasive test saves lives...

Art + Science =SMART!

Those Q,R,S,T waves give us so much information!

Karenina

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024

Thank you so much, Karenina! :)

reply by karenina on 17-Jan-2024

You bet!