Age
a 1-6-1 poetry form7 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Well done! This one resonated and made sense! Wonderful image. That's me when it comes to technology and ringing up the utilities companies:)) My favourite! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Well done! This one resonated and made sense! Wonderful image. That's me when it comes to technology and ringing up the utilities companies:)) My favourite! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much Debbie.
Comment from Navada
Very understandable! One only has to watch the nightly news or election updates to feel this condition coming on. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Very understandable! One only has to watch the nightly news or election updates to feel this condition coming on. Thanks for the share and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thank you Navada.
Comment from Julie Helms
Yeah, I'm pretty sure I'm at that stage too! Lol! Good entry for the contest. You got the syllables, you got the rhymes, and it even makes sense. Good luck! Julie.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Yeah, I'm pretty sure I'm at that stage too! Lol! Good entry for the contest. You got the syllables, you got the rhymes, and it even makes sense. Good luck! Julie.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you Julie.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest
with the three rhymes and exact syllables.
Many on fanstory will relate to the theme.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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This is an excellent poem and entry for the contest
with the three rhymes and exact syllables.
Many on fanstory will relate to the theme.
Well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much Robert.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I was wondering what age you are. You don't have to tell me if you don't want it. I am up there too. . Not crazy about either. Your picture definitely goes with the poem.. good job on the poem
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I was wondering what age you are. You don't have to tell me if you don't want it. I am up there too. . Not crazy about either. Your picture definitely goes with the poem.. good job on the poem
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thanks Brenda... I'm 64 and loving every minute of life. I thought this would be a fun write. :)
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I'm going to be 68 in March. I see your posts alot. You must like to write
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I do like to write poetry. I've been on FS since 2017. I hadn't written anything before I began here. Its been really fun to write and to get to know people.
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I joined about 1 month ago. I really like it
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Oh no! lol!! This is funny! You did use the correct syllables ans write an amusing poem, to which many others will relate. As much as we want to keep aging, it does give us humans many reasons to complain. I'm kind of glad I was diagnosed with MS at 26 years old. Now, when people my age are complaining about aging, I can think, I've been there and conquered a lot of that already. :) My dad died young, just months before what would've been his 100th birthday. That my hope for myself too. Die young at 100!
Excellent writing! Best wishes!
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Oh no! lol!! This is funny! You did use the correct syllables ans write an amusing poem, to which many others will relate. As much as we want to keep aging, it does give us humans many reasons to complain. I'm kind of glad I was diagnosed with MS at 26 years old. Now, when people my age are complaining about aging, I can think, I've been there and conquered a lot of that already. :) My dad died young, just months before what would've been his 100th birthday. That my hope for myself too. Die young at 100!
Excellent writing! Best wishes!
Alex
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thanks Alex... what a lovely story about your Dad. I hope you get your wish and life as long as he did. Hugs, my friend.
Comment from QC Poet
Great photo and 1-6-1 syllable poem on aging, and true too. As we age we have less patience for the things we don't like. Good Luck in the contest looking forward to posting a 1-6-1 syllable poem as well maybe on a future contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Great photo and 1-6-1 syllable poem on aging, and true too. As we age we have less patience for the things we don't like. Good Luck in the contest looking forward to posting a 1-6-1 syllable poem as well maybe on a future contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Hi QC. I thought this would be a fun one to do and since we are all aging, perhaps, people can relate. Thanks