2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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9 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
It is a stunning presentation with words that match the butterfly being reflected in the dewdrop.
You captured the delicate beauty of the butterfly perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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It is a stunning presentation with words that match the butterfly being reflected in the dewdrop.
You captured the delicate beauty of the butterfly perfectly.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 18-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, for the exceptional six stars
Gypsy hugs review and kind words.
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
firstly, how beautiful is this presentation... no, it's not a question, it's a statement!:)
Straight a way, I'm thinking...
Beautiful butterfly
riding on a dewdrop
self-reflection.
But, unfortunately you are more in line with the actuality of the magic you create though perfect little breathing spaces. Me, I'm just 'head in the clouds':)
I do believe the words and the visual really meld into the wholeness of this most exceptional Haiku... and when you consider that the visual creates the dialogue in expression of fragility, the journey and the destination. Stunning!
Yes MariVal, this poem may be short in form, but the echoes linger way after the read((((((((((((.
Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
the metamorphosis to authenticity.
Warmest regards,
James.
******Star Exceptional!!!!!!
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Hi MariVal,
firstly, how beautiful is this presentation... no, it's not a question, it's a statement!:)
Straight a way, I'm thinking...
Beautiful butterfly
riding on a dewdrop
self-reflection.
But, unfortunately you are more in line with the actuality of the magic you create though perfect little breathing spaces. Me, I'm just 'head in the clouds':)
I do believe the words and the visual really meld into the wholeness of this most exceptional Haiku... and when you consider that the visual creates the dialogue in expression of fragility, the journey and the destination. Stunning!
Yes MariVal, this poem may be short in form, but the echoes linger way after the read((((((((((((.
Beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
the metamorphosis to authenticity.
Warmest regards,
James.
******Star Exceptional!!!!!!
Comment Written 17-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your 6 stars exceptional review....so insightful and encouraging. I'm always happy to read your feedback. I'm happy you like this little guy.
Con cariņo,
Marival
Through rebirth we ascend to a more beautiful Self-- gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I like the "self-reflection" and it works for the butterfly being reflected in the dewdrop and it works for the poet and reader reflecting on how fragile life is in general.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I like the "self-reflection" and it works for the butterfly being reflected in the dewdrop and it works for the poet and reader reflecting on how fragile life is in general.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love,
Marival
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, I love this poem. It is such a happy poem. Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery. Of special note:
self-reflection
(Good Satori line)
This poem also reminded me of Brooke, adewdrop. May she rest in peace.
Beautiful photo and presentation. This poem made me smile.
Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Hi Gypsy, I love this poem. It is such a happy poem. Your poem reads and flows well and has good imagery. Of special note:
self-reflection
(Good Satori line)
This poem also reminded me of Brooke, adewdrop. May she rest in peace.
Beautiful photo and presentation. This poem made me smile.
Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Margaret.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Here is another prime example of more than meets the eye. It is an image that we can see. The butterfly liting on a tiny drop of dew. Then there is the inner message. Stopping to self reflect. We become the butterfly. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Here is another prime example of more than meets the eye. It is an image that we can see. The butterfly liting on a tiny drop of dew. Then there is the inner message. Stopping to self reflect. We become the butterfly. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
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Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
You combined the fantastic artwork and coloring scheme with your emotive verse in your ekphrastic club entry. The expressive language provides a vivid image to consider. While you used "balances' in the present tense, for me 'balanced' works even better.
Mark
Mark
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Gypsy,
You combined the fantastic artwork and coloring scheme with your emotive verse in your ekphrastic club entry. The expressive language provides a vivid image to consider. While you used "balances' in the present tense, for me 'balanced' works even better.
Mark
Mark
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark. I changed to balanced, it does sound better. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I like the idea of a butterfly balancing on a dew drop. I'm wondering if they really can, but then I'm curious what a butterfly has to self-reflect about. Hmmm, maybe a lot more than we are capable of comprehending. I enjoyed reading and the complete presentation was beautiful.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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I like the idea of a butterfly balancing on a dew drop. I'm wondering if they really can, but then I'm curious what a butterfly has to self-reflect about. Hmmm, maybe a lot more than we are capable of comprehending. I enjoyed reading and the complete presentation was beautiful.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
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Comment from shelley kaye
awesome butterfly haiku for the picture - love the self-reflection satori!
great imagery and smooth flow through each word/line connection
cool colours, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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awesome butterfly haiku for the picture - love the self-reflection satori!
great imagery and smooth flow through each word/line connection
cool colours, too!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Great job here on this very beautiful verse. Your presentation is always wonderful and over the top. I loved the satori being an 'aha' moment and standing out in meaning. As always, a wonderful job, Gypsy.
Melissa
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Great job here on this very beautiful verse. Your presentation is always wonderful and over the top. I loved the satori being an 'aha' moment and standing out in meaning. As always, a wonderful job, Gypsy.
Melissa
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much, Melissa.
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