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Smile Wide

Be happy and not sad.

3 total reviews 
Comment from rjuselius
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This is a lovely piece of poetry dear anonymous! However unfortunately dial has two syllables. Fix this and i will fix my rating.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings with hugs and kisses.
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
    I have changed the word in the first line. Thank you for your help and kind review! Please revise it.
reply by rjuselius on 17-Jan-2024
    I fixed your rating. I think the poem is much better now <3
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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I enjoyed this poem. It made me smile. All those people smiling. They are also waving their hands. It is uplifting. A nice positive poem. Picture matches words well.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from Sugarray77
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So fun. Your photo is superbly chosen to se the stage for this verse. It's always great to read an upbeat poem and this certainly is one of those. I wish you luck!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024
    Thank you so much!