Comment from Stef Lau

Good

I love the golden path of Christ within you. It shows valid and loyal love & faith. I feel that if it was extended just one more passage it would promote solace and comfort.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

Thank you so much. I'm still an unworthy but learning writer.

Comment from Claire Tennant

Excellent

This is beautiful. You do walk by faith and not by sight in the sense that you quote the Bible: "I walk by faith and not by sight', but the verses help the reader take a walk with you. Images of the healing, or how He has taught you. This is the sort of thing people should read if they doubt. I have no doubt your faith is strong. This poem may easily turn those who do not believe in the right direction. Best wishes for your success always

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2024

I have written some things I'm not so proud of, but I always feel good when writing for The Lord.

Comment from Mintybee

Excellent

This was a lovely poem of faith that describes your personal spiritual journey. The abab cdcd efef etc rhyme scheme was steady. The accompanying art is beautiful.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024

Many thanks for your kind words!

Comment from Yusita

Excellent

This is an excellent poem that is laden with hope, encouragement, and personal testimony. I loved how you made lines 1 and 3 rhyme as well as lines 2 and 4. This is a solid entry for the Faith contest!

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2024

Thank you. There was a little trouble with the editor, but I fixed it. Now the poem is complete and easier on the eyes, with a video.