Fungus Fun
Lowku Entry8 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
If anything, your photo is disgusting. As a photo prompt, this entry would certainly stand at the top of the podium. Your words have also done well to describe the moment. Yuck!
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If anything, your photo is disgusting. As a photo prompt, this entry would certainly stand at the top of the podium. Your words have also done well to describe the moment. Yuck!
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This poem and its words are absolutely true. That's what happens when a person ages. It's best to have a pedicure or manicure so this does not happen.
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This poem and its words are absolutely true. That's what happens when a person ages. It's best to have a pedicure or manicure so this does not happen.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
Comment from Navada
Yep, this definitely addresses the requirements of the challenge! Bodies are fascinating things and the various substances they sometimes sport are very interesting. :)
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Yep, this definitely addresses the requirements of the challenge! Bodies are fascinating things and the various substances they sometimes sport are very interesting. :)
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
Comment from jessizero
You absolutely met the requirements for this contest. You had the correct syllable count, and the topic was definitely gross. The picture really added a punch to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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You absolutely met the requirements for this contest. You had the correct syllable count, and the topic was definitely gross. The picture really added a punch to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
Comment from QC Poet
You definitely have hit the mark with your 5-7-5 compliant approach to this Lowku entry Good luck with your entry and on any future poetry contest projects
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You definitely have hit the mark with your 5-7-5 compliant approach to this Lowku entry Good luck with your entry and on any future poetry contest projects
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
Ewww! I think even healthy feet are kind of gross, but throw in a fungus and you have a winning combination! I like the solution, garden shears. Nicely done!
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Ewww! I think even healthy feet are kind of gross, but throw in a fungus and you have a winning combination! I like the solution, garden shears. Nicely done!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Oh, my frickin-A GAWD!!!! This is some seriously disturbing contest you've entered here, Mystery Poet. But I see that you've taken it very seriously and are in it to win it.
I'm wondering about this part, though: Did you run out of syllables to also include mentioning those HAIRY TOES!?? OYYYYYY!!!
Holy Macarole! I will never be able to un-see this, will I? Next summer, when I return to my garden shears, I will certainly think of you and this masterpiece of a contest entry.
I'm not sure: is winning this actually a victory? If so, I have to think, after reading all the others, that it's you all the way!!
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Oh, my frickin-A GAWD!!!! This is some seriously disturbing contest you've entered here, Mystery Poet. But I see that you've taken it very seriously and are in it to win it.
I'm wondering about this part, though: Did you run out of syllables to also include mentioning those HAIRY TOES!?? OYYYYYY!!!
Holy Macarole! I will never be able to un-see this, will I? Next summer, when I return to my garden shears, I will certainly think of you and this masterpiece of a contest entry.
I'm not sure: is winning this actually a victory? If so, I have to think, after reading all the others, that it's you all the way!!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
Comment from Janet Foor
Been there, done that. Certainly, a gross, nasty, disgusting subject for this Lowku Poem for the writing prompt. I think toe fungus fits all three. Perfect picture for this unrhymed poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Been there, done that. Certainly, a gross, nasty, disgusting subject for this Lowku Poem for the writing prompt. I think toe fungus fits all three. Perfect picture for this unrhymed poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024