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Comment from aryr
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What a wonderful picture of little Orphan Annie and a great ESSENCE HAIKU, Gypsy. She wanted to find her real parents, poor tiny Orphan Annie. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by aryr on 16-Jan-2024
    You are so welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Sugarray77
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Excellent work, Gypsy! You did a super job evoking a feeling of pity and sadness. I hope she finds her parents. As always, your writing is superb!

Melissa

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, my friend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Yes Gypsy, the sad-looking child needs help with her dreams.

Let's believe there will be a happy ending to her story.

Good illustration for your club contest.

Mark

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words, my friend.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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but orphan annie had red curly hair and was adopted by a millionaire LOL!

good essence haiku!
has a nice hopeful feeling to it and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
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I really like this picture, and you have captured thoughts of what a child in this situation would be hoping or thinking about, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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I like how you contrasted the "small" child dreaming "BIG" about a real family. It's so sad that so many children are being orphaned because of the wars these days.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love,
    Marival.

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I've already mentioned how much I want to help all these children. With the wars continuing there are more and more orphaned children.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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These phiotos wrench at the heart strings Gypsy, I feel like adopting them all, but it's hard adopting, they make it difficult, such beautiful children, I wish, I wish, beautiful writing my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, Roy.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 13-Jan-2024
    Welcome