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Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Time to Eat!"An Encanto fan fic, cause why not.
4 total reviews
Comment from Julie G1
So well written. The characters do take on an essence, building to the next installment of this tale. This chapter expresses the word pictures clearly, using an apt choice of language and imagery. Worked well for this reader, who anticipates more of this story. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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So well written. The characters do take on an essence, building to the next installment of this tale. This chapter expresses the word pictures clearly, using an apt choice of language and imagery. Worked well for this reader, who anticipates more of this story. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Why thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
LOL an excellent way of looking at things now we get to deal with your characters too which is a pleasure to do as you have a really great story going here! A great storyline with believable characters and interesting character names! Your style of writing is sublime very clear I'm able to follow along easily. I see no issues with grammar aesthetic subject matter or sentence structure this is a great entry I wish you the best of luck with your books hope to read more and I hope your day is amazing too!
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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LOL an excellent way of looking at things now we get to deal with your characters too which is a pleasure to do as you have a really great story going here! A great storyline with believable characters and interesting character names! Your style of writing is sublime very clear I'm able to follow along easily. I see no issues with grammar aesthetic subject matter or sentence structure this is a great entry I wish you the best of luck with your books hope to read more and I hope your day is amazing too!
Comment Written 15-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Wow, thanks so much for the encouraging review. Thanks!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Yup, you went everywhere, and got the entire family walking the ropes:) it took me a while to understand who is what and where is going. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Yup, you went everywhere, and got the entire family walking the ropes:) it took me a while to understand who is what and where is going. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Yeah, there be a bunch o'folks floating about - doin stuff. Thank you for the kind review!
Comment from Sabrina H.
I never saw the movie Encanto, but kind of want to know because of your fan fiction. This was an interesting and well written chapter. I did not see any grammar or punctuation error, just a crisp and intriguing chapter.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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I never saw the movie Encanto, but kind of want to know because of your fan fiction. This was an interesting and well written chapter. I did not see any grammar or punctuation error, just a crisp and intriguing chapter.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2024
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Why thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!
