Above Drifting Clouds
A Short Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
It's always a treat to see you, kahpot. So glad to hear you mending fine and have presented to us a most uplifting message of faith.
The artwork is an inspired choice to show your never ending faith.
Good stuff and I look forward to reading more. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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It's always a treat to see you, kahpot. So glad to hear you mending fine and have presented to us a most uplifting message of faith.
The artwork is an inspired choice to show your never ending faith.
Good stuff and I look forward to reading more. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love this piece it's such a fairy atmosphere and it opens up the door to a magic world. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and keep up the flow of inspiration.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Love this piece it's such a fairy atmosphere and it opens up the door to a magic world. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and keep up the flow of inspiration.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Welcome back, Kahpot!
I like how you have us looking up at the sky and seeing hope and faith in the beautiful stars. I really liked "stars invite reachable dreams ." This could have been for the faith contest or the haiku.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Welcome back, Kahpot!
I like how you have us looking up at the sky and seeing hope and faith in the beautiful stars. I really liked "stars invite reachable dreams ." This could have been for the faith contest or the haiku.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jamison Brown
It's great to see you back posting, kahpot.
This is a very nice 5-7-5, of which you are a master.
"faiths light never fades" is eternally true. (you might need an apostrophe, depending on your meaning of faiths)
Take care. - Jamison
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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It's great to see you back posting, kahpot.
This is a very nice 5-7-5, of which you are a master.
"faiths light never fades" is eternally true. (you might need an apostrophe, depending on your meaning of faiths)
Take care. - Jamison
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review and comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Navada
I really liked your exploration of light, stars and clouds in this haiku and it gives the reader a sense of the heavens working together for our inspiration. Only one little edit needed - Faith's in your final line. Thanks for the share! :)
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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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I really liked your exploration of light, stars and clouds in this haiku and it gives the reader a sense of the heavens working together for our inspiration. Only one little edit needed - Faith's in your final line. Thanks for the share! :)
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
