Above Drifting Clouds
A Short Poem15 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
A wonderful poem that is so meaningful... especially in your last line... "faith's light never fades". The ambiance of drifting clouds and stars are also very good visuals to include in a poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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A wonderful poem that is so meaningful... especially in your last line... "faith's light never fades". The ambiance of drifting clouds and stars are also very good visuals to include in a poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 16-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your 5/7/5 poem- nicely worded - picture presentation connecting- a message of hope an encouragement- a positive outlook - dreams can come true with faith- glad you are recovering- missed reading your poems! Take care my friend- Bless AP
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I like your 5/7/5 poem- nicely worded - picture presentation connecting- a message of hope an encouragement- a positive outlook - dreams can come true with faith- glad you are recovering- missed reading your poems! Take care my friend- Bless AP
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
I found this to be very thoughtfully written, and thought-provoking too, as I imagined the stars reaching out, following dreams, some reachable, some perhaps not, but they reach out with faith and hope, looking beyond.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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I found this to be very thoughtfully written, and thought-provoking too, as I imagined the stars reaching out, following dreams, some reachable, some perhaps not, but they reach out with faith and hope, looking beyond.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Wendy, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We sometimes see the stars in between the cloud to give us a sense of hope as they glisten in the moonlight, much enjoyed, glad you are back, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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We sometimes see the stars in between the cloud to give us a sense of hope as they glisten in the moonlight, much enjoyed, glad you are back, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful short poem, my kind. :) great imagery and presentation. It's good to read your poems again.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis ypsy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Wonderful short poem, my kind. :) great imagery and presentation. It's good to read your poems again.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis ypsy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is great to see you, kahpot.
-Glad to hear you are doing better.
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the stars and clouds.
-I like the idea of "reachable dreams."
-A very good concluding line.
-Take care and be well.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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-It is great to see you, kahpot.
-Glad to hear you are doing better.
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery with the stars and clouds.
-I like the idea of "reachable dreams."
-A very good concluding line.
-Take care and be well.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, Happy New Year. It's good to see you in print again.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good sensory appeal and
imagery within.
Of special note:
stars invite reachable dreams ~
(K, indeed they do, and sometimes, unreachable dreams as well.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read.
Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Hello Kahpot, Happy New Year. It's good to see you in print again.
Your poem reads and flows well and has good sensory appeal and
imagery within.
Of special note:
stars invite reachable dreams ~
(K, indeed they do, and sometimes, unreachable dreams as well.)
Perfect photo choice. Well done. A pleasure to read.
Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
Diane,
It feels like a Lune, but no matter a 5-7-5 Haiku also works for me.
Your middle line is a most expressive phrasing and combines nicely with your faith line.
I too often use Cleo for my artwork. She has a good portfolio to choose from.
Mark
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Diane,
It feels like a Lune, but no matter a 5-7-5 Haiku also works for me.
Your middle line is a most expressive phrasing and combines nicely with your faith line.
I too often use Cleo for my artwork. She has a good portfolio to choose from.
Mark
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
It is ultimately our faith that sustains us and propels us toward impossible dreams. Or what we feel are impossible. With Him all things are possible. Very inspiring piece with beautiful artwork.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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It is ultimately our faith that sustains us and propels us toward impossible dreams. Or what we feel are impossible. With Him all things are possible. Very inspiring piece with beautiful artwork.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is beautifully written, Kahpot! I'm happy to see you back and on the mend. I hope nothing too serious happened to your health. I'm looking forward to more posts. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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This is beautifully written, Kahpot! I'm happy to see you back and on the mend. I hope nothing too serious happened to your health. I'm looking forward to more posts. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2024
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Thank you JohnC, as always very much appreciated, I'm looking forward to getting back and reading more****kahpot
