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Comment from Douglas Goff
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Another one seriously lacking a much needed six. You are the only person I know that is talented enough to take a moth and make it beautiful.

I've been traipsing through your work this evening and commenting on some pieces that I have missed and strike me as.....wonderful.
Douglas.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2024
    I know! You are so kind to read my old postings. I'm sending you a Gypsy blessing

    Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from June Sargent
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This poem highlights the beauty of the Luna moth - which has a very short life span - and that of the moon flower that blooms only at night. Their union is a miracle in itself. And you have shared the magic beautifully with us amidst stardust.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much, June. I appreciate your review.

    gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I love the idea of stardust and the moonflower. This American Moon Moth is gorgeous with it's lime green wings. Thank you for highlighting it in this beautiful poem and presentation.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Sugarray77
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I like the implied pun of stardust and that the moon is a star. The connection is obscure, but real. Your verse is beautifully written and presented Gypsy, as always! I enjoyed reading it.

Melissa

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Good morning, Gypsy!
Exquisite emotional and literal imagery.
I've never actually seen a luna moth = Bucket List!
Love the phrase, "leg deep in stardust."

Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
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I enjoyed this very much, and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. You present things so beautifully and it is always a pleasure to see your work. May you have a good day and God bless. Patricia.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Gloria ....
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Insects are fascinating, and when you zoom in on their appearance, they can also be quite beautiful.

This fella is leg deep in the spices of a moonflower and that has got to be tasty.

Well done, Gypsy. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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The gorgeous image is like a beautiful butterfly. The words are very much related to the image. Moths can get into clothes and make holes. I'm not sure if I would want them in my clothes closet.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
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The "leg deep in stardust" made me smile. It's also perfect to reference "star" since the "luna" moth refers to the moon and it's actually on a moonflower. Lovely picture!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you, big sister. Have a wonderful night.

    Love
    Marival
Comment from royowen
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I like this, just the addition describing what's going on with this moth, and it changed complete complexion of the poem completely, very clever, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2024

reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
    Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.

    Gypsy hugs