Scenes at a Third Party
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Comment from lyenochka
Well communication wasn't the main point at this meeting. But apparently, the wine was good even if it was mistook for other liquids...
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Don't know if this was to show LorDee's inebriated state:
collabrative thinking and doing. (collaborative)
Our boarders will be controled (borders ... controlled)
better fund raisers. (fundraisers)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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Well communication wasn't the main point at this meeting. But apparently, the wine was good even if it was mistook for other liquids...
Suggestions:
Don't know if this was to show LorDee's inebriated state:
collabrative thinking and doing. (collaborative)
Our boarders will be controled (borders ... controlled)
better fund raisers. (fundraisers)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2024
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And these people want to run the world.
Comment from Navada
This is definitely a motley crew with some pretty bizarre interpretations of things! I like the comic touches and particularly the comic misunderstandings of the less learned crew members. :)
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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This is definitely a motley crew with some pretty bizarre interpretations of things! I like the comic touches and particularly the comic misunderstandings of the less learned crew members. :)
Comment Written 11-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Navada
Comment from Gunner Lil
A very good job. A funny work of what can take place at a boring get together.
Outstanding dialogue. This reader wants more.
Thank you. Semper Fi. 1961-1994
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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A very good job. A funny work of what can take place at a boring get together.
Outstanding dialogue. This reader wants more.
Thank you. Semper Fi. 1961-1994
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Gunner Lil
Comment from Sabrina H.
Confusing talk around a table...you can definitely tell this is a political campaign. I like it. Thank for sharing and can't wait to read more.
Keep writing:)
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Confusing talk around a table...you can definitely tell this is a political campaign. I like it. Thank for sharing and can't wait to read more.
Keep writing:)
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thanks, K
Comment from nomi338
My head is swimming, am I under water? Is Pons starting to sound like Ned. I am totally out of my element. I think I may need to lay down and nap for the next ten minutes.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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My head is swimming, am I under water? Is Pons starting to sound like Ned. I am totally out of my element. I think I may need to lay down and nap for the next ten minutes.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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It may seem like they are all one person.
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Heaven help us all.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is so whacky, Bill! And I have to keep reminding myself who's who. But it's great fun and a wonderful satirical tonic for what's going on right now. Love the way that LorDee is trying in vain to hold the whole campaign together. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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This is so whacky, Bill! And I have to keep reminding myself who's who. But it's great fun and a wonderful satirical tonic for what's going on right now. Love the way that LorDee is trying in vain to hold the whole campaign together. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
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Thanks, Debbie for giving this a look.