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Coming Back from Her Stroke

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Kathy had a stroke before Christmas

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Comment from Chrissy710
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Totally agree Bill a good nurse should be able to see her patients needs without being asked
I used to tell my student nurses your best assessment tools are your eyes
It is a shame that health care has become so impersonal
now
So i know exactly what you
mean A good statement and apt image
Hope all is well with you
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Chris. We are moving slowly forward.
Comment from Gloria ....
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I think you described this perfectly in a very short story that actually works. Course it reminded me of the scene in Terms of Endearment when Shirley MacLaine had to scream and throw a fit to get the staff's attention.

Neat artwork as well. I hope Kathy is improving.

Thanks for sharing, Bill.

Gloria

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Gloria
Comment from nomi338
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I think it is probably unavoidable for some staff to pursue a state of semi-invisibility just so they can take a short breather. I think back to the times when the pandemic did not allow room, time, or opportunity for staff to even take a deep breath before having to respond to the next emergency. Hang in, things will work out. I do believe that.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2024
    Perhaps.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Ha, ha, ha this is so true, and sometimes even the bribing and the money doesn't help, so you stay invisible forever. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Iza
Comment from karenina
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As both a retired RN and one who has desperately sought out help for a loved one, I relate to both sides. I can imagine how frustrating it must feel to need to speak to a medical professional and watch a flurry of them rush by as if you were the ghost of illnesses past!

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Karenina. Makes me feel like the poor cousin at the big wedding.
reply by karenina on 09-Jan-2024
    If I had a nickel for all the times I've said "I see you, I'll be there shortly" --
    I'd still be feeling guilty I didn't have four more hands to assist with!
Comment from Ulla
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Yes, I so understand this sentiment, Bill, and it brings me back to where you're.at right now. How is Kathy? Is there any improvement? My thoughts are with you and your family. Ulla,:)))

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thank you, Ulla. Kathy is incrementally improving.
reply by Ulla on 09-Jan-2024
    I'm pleased to hearing that. It will be a long process.
Comment from eliz100
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This is so true. I was a nurse in my working life, now retired. In our health care system, we are identified by our insurance number. Now, I am a patient, and I feel invisible. You have described this very well in a few words and a picture. I do not see any need for improvement. Have a blessed day.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Thanks, Elizabeth
Comment from lyenochka
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That's awful! I know the hospital staff is overworked but they can't just ignore the patients or even the patients' family because life critical decisions might need to be made.

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
    Right?